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Outline or Organic?

April 17, 2013 By JPMcLean 6 Comments

Live edge writing desk in a cozy room
When I’m writing organically…

The pros and cons of Outline vs Organic

When I wrote my first book, Awakening, it was an organic process. I flew by the seat of my pants. I started with one scene, developed it into a paragraph, then into a page, and finally into an entire chapter. Eventually the story filled out as characters and scenes presented themselves, but it was messy. With no outline, I had no map. It meant constantly raking back through what I’d written to check the details. Did character X have brown hair or blond? Had he come on the scene before character Y?

My writing process changed as I found my way.

Eventually I grew tired of that reference game and developed two “helper” documents. One summarized setting details, and characters’ physical attributes and personality quirks. The other was a timeline to keep track of dates when events occurred. This is critical to ensure realistic timing between events. For example, if a character suffers a black eye, you can’t have the bruising gone two days later when he or she shows up at work.

Both documents have proven indispensable. After the first major edit of Awakening (and there were many), I decided to begin the story several scenes after its original start. The timeline document helped me place the back story I’d cut. Another edit had me moving scenes earlier or later in the timeline. Unravelling story arcs and reworking them into different times proved very difficult. The timeline document helped, but having a map with more detail would have saved me a lot of work.

A outline developed.

Arborite writing desk in a stark white room
When I’m writing with an outline…

With my second book, Revelation, I organized myself a little differently. I started by arranging story snippets I’d cut from Book I and wanted to include in Book II. That list expanded as I added plot points and new characters and settings. By the time I’d finished, I recognized it as an outline. It wasn’t comprehensive, but it proved a good addition to my helper documents, and kept me better organized.

When writing my third book, Redemption, an outline became imperative. The Gift is a trilogy so story arcs needed to be tied up and back story needed to be judiciously spread out. I’m organized, but there are limits; I couldn’t keep that many details in my head. I needed to flesh them out in an outline first. Even with the outline, I had challenges segueing smoothly from one scene to another and spent days waiting for that stellar idea rather than writing.

Outlines aren’t for everyone.

They’re tools. Sometimes outlines are useful – other times they get in the way. The same is true of writing organically. Being a pantster isn’t for everyone. I think every writer finds their own comfort zone over time.

Who knows what process I’ll use with the next book. I’ll let the story and its characters guide me and bring in other writing tools as and when they’re needed. What process works for you?

 

Wooden desk Photo by Justin Kauffman on Unsplash

White desk Photo by Gabriel Beaudry on Unsplash

Cover Art Quest

April 9, 2013 By JPMcLean 8 Comments

Washington Coast
Washington State Coastline

Cover Art Quest

There’s little slack time in this business. If you’re not writing a book, you’re writing a blog post, tweeting a thank you, or updating your Facebook page. There are publisher’s proofs to review, blog tours to schedule, press releases won’t write themselves, and book covers need to be designed. As much as I would love to spend all my days writing, this business is more complex than that. Many other chores demand a piece of my time.

On the Road Again

JP with Molly in California

Happily, most of those chores can be done from the road, which is where I am. It’s familiar territory for me having spent so many winters “heading south.” This week I’m driving down the Pacific coast with my husband, John, and our sweet Molly to find the perfect photo inspiration for the cover of Book III, Redemption.

Cover art is an important component of any book. It has the potential to either draw people in or send them scurrying. For better or worse*, from the very start, I’ve had a strong opinion of what the visual should be for my books. It’s always been the beach.

The beach plays a critical role in all three books.

In Awakening, the beach is a cruel mistress that serves as the setting for imparting the gift, awakening it, and finally, setting it free.  In Revelation, the beach serves as a reminder of where it all began, and then plays hand maiden to the larger story that occurs within metres of that same beach. The beach is also an important element in Redemption.

Viona Halim is the talented graphic artist who painted the first two covers. She did a wonderful job creating not only compelling water colours, but also capturing the ominous mood that prevails in the books.

The book cover for Redemption will be in keeping with the trilogy’s mood, which is still dark and mysterious, but this time it will reflect the very unique cliff face and low vegetation typical to Bodega Bay, California, which is where a pivotal scene takes place. And that’s what brings me here. It’s a cover art quest. I need to get some photos of these beaches for Viona to work with.

Cover Reveal

The cover for Book II is about to be revealed. Keep your eyes peeled because just after the cover reveal, Revelation will be released. I can’t wait.

As an aside, this is our first road trip without Molly’s half-sister, Soozie. They travelled extensively with us since 2000. It seems strange to be making this journey without her – as if a book end is missing.

*Update: in 2018, the heavy hand I had in book cover design proved fatal. Read more about the rebrand here.

10 Lessons From Writing a Book

March 24, 2013 By JPMcLean 6 Comments

West Coast Sunset

Following are ten lessons I’ve learned from writing a book.

Three years ago, if someone had told me I’d write a book one day, I would have laughed – not out loud – but I’d quietly question their sanity. Following are ten lessons I’ve learned from writing a book.

Write a book?  Me?  Today, the only person’s sanity I question is my own. Not only did I write a book, I wrote three.  It’s been a long, all-consuming, hedonistic, educational, inspirational, and frustrating experience. And I wouldn’t trade it for the world.

Here are a few tidbits about writing I’ve learned along the way:

  1. I’ve learned how little I know;
  2. I’ve learned that most character archetypes and story arcs have been around since the beginning of time;
  3. I’ve learned the value of a creative story editor and a keen-eyed copy editor;
  4. I’ve learned to love search engines;
  5. I’ve learned the importance of a sense of humour;
  6. I’ve learned to repeatedly thumb the pages of Strunk and White, the Handbook for Writers and The Canadian Oxford Dictionary;
  7. I’ve learned that there are creative, intelligent writers out there who are willing to share their time and considerable knowledge;
  8. I’ve learned that cold/beta readers are indispensable;
  9. I’ve learned how much I love writing;
  10. I’ve been humbled by the generosity of friends, family and fellow writers who share this passion.

I’ve also learned I’m neither crazy nor alone, but that’s a blog post for another day.

Want to know more? Check out How I Got My Start and read the press release published by the Comox Valley Record.

You can purchase all the Gift Legacy books on the Bookstore Tab.

I hope you’ve enjoyed ten lessons I’ve learned from writing a book.

After The End

March 14, 2013 By JPMcLean 2 Comments

An old typewriter sitting on a rough wood table

I’d been writing for months before I told anyone. It would be many more months before I typed “The End” and found the courage to let someone read what I’d written. I say courage because it felt like exposing myself, as if I were admitting I’d developed an embarrassing fetish.

After my secret was out, I felt less guilt about choosing to plunk away at the computer rather than weed the gardens, but where was I going with my writing? When I finished writing Awakening, I went looking for the answer.

It thrilled me that I’d written a book, but what did I do with it?

Most publishers won’t accept unsolicited manuscripts. You have to submit through an agent. My research showed that getting an agent, let alone getting published, was a long shot. Nonetheless, this is how it was done. I researched potential agents, prepared the required submission material, and sent out a dozen query letters.

While I waited for their responses, I began to question the sanity of the process.

I’d already made a considerable investment in time and money: a manuscript evaluation, several manuscript printings, postage back and forth to cold readers, an editor, and cover art.

Did I want to invest more time on the minuscule chance I’d find an agent? And if I got an agent, did I want to wait again for them to sell it to a publisher? And if my agent had the good fortune to sell it, did I want to wait a year or more for them to publish it?

My research also showed that most new authors are paid a pittance, get no marketing support, and being untested, don’t have the negotiating clout to improve their contracts. Some of those contracts include language that makes it difficult to get rights back. Additionally, if the book doesn’t sell well in its first few months, it fades from bookstore shelves.

I don’t begrudge agents or publishers their right to whatever business model works for them.

But is their business model a good fit for me?

The answer is no.

After further research, I decided to indie publish. Because I don’t (yet) have the technical skills to navigate the process, I partnered with a local company. They handle the formatting for hardcover, trade paperback, and ebook editions, and make it available at multiple retailers.

It’s a compromise. I don’t have full control, but I haven’t signed away my rights. Indie publishing isn’t for everyone, but so far (for me at least) the pros outweigh the cons.

I’m investing in me and I’m not finished yet. The second book in the trilogy, Revelation is on the verge of publication, and I’m indie publishing again.

As it turns out, “The End” is just the beginning.

 

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