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Cover Reveal for Revelation

June 7, 2013 By JPMcLean 2 Comments

Cover Reveal for Revelation

It’s finally here! This is the cover for Book II of The Gift Trilogy, Revelation.*

Revelation Book Cover

The cover originates from a photo taken on the beach near my home. A graphic designer by the name of Viona Halim painted it. You might recognize her work from the first book, Awakening.

I think she’s outdone herself. Once again, she’s created a stunning cover that captures the beauty of the west coast setting and the ominous mood of the book. So why a lighthouse, you ask? You’ll have to read the book for that scrumptious detail.

Look for Revelation in mid-June. Once again, FriesenPress will publish it and Ingram will distribute it. The book is 328 pages and will be available in e-book, trade paperback and hardcover formats from your favourite retailers.

Having been through this process once before, I know that it takes time for a new release to make its way through the distribution chain. Therefore, I’ll wait until it hits the stores before I shout it to the heavens.

Meantime, check out the re-vamped website: https://jpmcleanauthor.com. Its facelift accommodates the new book and I’ve included an excerpt from Book III there as well.

As always, I’d love your feedback. Let me know your thoughts on the cover reveal for Revelation.

*Revelation is now titled Hidden Enemy.

Hidden Enemy rebranded cover replaces Revelation

What readers are saying about Hidden Enemy:

A superbly crafted fantasy thriller
—Diana Stevan, author of A Cry from the Deep

A guaranteed page turner
—Island Gals Magazine

Passionate and fun romp
—Bill Engleson, author of Like a Child to Home

Suspenseful . . . Kept me reading ’til dawn
—Sally Rae Dyck, author of For the Love of Food

Timing Woes

May 31, 2013 By JPMcLean 2 Comments

Referee in black and white shirt

Timing Woes

This time around, I thought I’d be better at predicting the timing of certain events in the course of publishing a book.

Apparently not.

Today I thought I’d be revealing the cover for Book II, Revelation. And I would have, except I wasn’t happy with the way the title looked on the final proof. So I chose to have it re-done rather than settle, which is the cause of my timing woes and why I’m writing this post instead of the “ta-da” post I’d envisioned.

As disappointed as I am with the delay, I’m keeping it in perspective. The cover will be all the better for it and anticipation is a sweet seduction.

Keep your eyes peeled for that “ta-da” post next week (I think).

 

Meantime, this is what readers are saying about Book 1, Secret Sky:

A thoroughly enjoyable read
—Island Gals Magazine

Fun . . . sensual, full of adventure
—Bill Engleson, author of Like a Child to Home

Kept me turning the page
—Diana Stevan, author of A Cry from the Deep

It’s gentle and lyric, and it’s dark and hard
—J.F. Kaufmann, author of the Langaer Chronicles

 

A quick summery of each book is available here.

 

Photo by Nathan Shively on Unsplash

Outline or Organic?

April 17, 2013 By JPMcLean 6 Comments

Live edge writing desk in a cozy room
When I’m writing organically…

The pros and cons of Outline vs Organic

When I wrote my first book, Awakening, it was an organic process. I flew by the seat of my pants. I started with one scene, developed it into a paragraph, then into a page, and finally into an entire chapter. Eventually the story filled out as characters and scenes presented themselves, but it was messy. With no outline, I had no map. It meant constantly raking back through what I’d written to check the details. Did character X have brown hair or blond? Had he come on the scene before character Y?

My writing process changed as I found my way.

Eventually I grew tired of that reference game and developed two “helper” documents. One summarized setting details, and characters’ physical attributes and personality quirks. The other was a timeline to keep track of dates when events occurred. This is critical to ensure realistic timing between events. For example, if a character suffers a black eye, you can’t have the bruising gone two days later when he or she shows up at work.

Both documents have proven indispensable. After the first major edit of Awakening (and there were many), I decided to begin the story several scenes after its original start. The timeline document helped me place the back story I’d cut. Another edit had me moving scenes earlier or later in the timeline. Unravelling story arcs and reworking them into different times proved very difficult. The timeline document helped, but having a map with more detail would have saved me a lot of work.

A outline developed.

Arborite writing desk in a stark white room
When I’m writing with an outline…

With my second book, Revelation, I organized myself a little differently. I started by arranging story snippets I’d cut from Book I and wanted to include in Book II. That list expanded as I added plot points and new characters and settings. By the time I’d finished, I recognized it as an outline. It wasn’t comprehensive, but it proved a good addition to my helper documents, and kept me better organized.

When writing my third book, Redemption, an outline became imperative. The Gift is a trilogy so story arcs needed to be tied up and back story needed to be judiciously spread out. I’m organized, but there are limits; I couldn’t keep that many details in my head. I needed to flesh them out in an outline first. Even with the outline, I had challenges segueing smoothly from one scene to another and spent days waiting for that stellar idea rather than writing.

Outlines aren’t for everyone.

They’re tools. Sometimes outlines are useful – other times they get in the way. The same is true of writing organically. Being a pantster isn’t for everyone. I think every writer finds their own comfort zone over time.

Who knows what process I’ll use with the next book. I’ll let the story and its characters guide me and bring in other writing tools as and when they’re needed. What process works for you?

 

Wooden desk Photo by Justin Kauffman on Unsplash

White desk Photo by Gabriel Beaudry on Unsplash

Cover Art Quest

April 9, 2013 By JPMcLean 8 Comments

Washington Coast
Washington State Coastline

Cover Art Quest

There’s little slack time in this business. If you’re not writing a book, you’re writing a blog post, tweeting a thank you, or updating your Facebook page. There are publisher’s proofs to review, blog tours to schedule, press releases won’t write themselves, and book covers need to be designed. As much as I would love to spend all my days writing, this business is more complex than that. Many other chores demand a piece of my time.

On the Road Again

JP with Molly in California

Happily, most of those chores can be done from the road, which is where I am. It’s familiar territory for me having spent so many winters “heading south.” This week I’m driving down the Pacific coast with my husband, John, and our sweet Molly to find the perfect photo inspiration for the cover of Book III, Redemption.

Cover art is an important component of any book. It has the potential to either draw people in or send them scurrying. For better or worse*, from the very start, I’ve had a strong opinion of what the visual should be for my books. It’s always been the beach.

The beach plays a critical role in all three books.

In Awakening, the beach is a cruel mistress that serves as the setting for imparting the gift, awakening it, and finally, setting it free.  In Revelation, the beach serves as a reminder of where it all began, and then plays hand maiden to the larger story that occurs within metres of that same beach. The beach is also an important element in Redemption.

Viona Halim is the talented graphic artist who painted the first two covers. She did a wonderful job creating not only compelling water colours, but also capturing the ominous mood that prevails in the books.

The book cover for Redemption will be in keeping with the trilogy’s mood, which is still dark and mysterious, but this time it will reflect the very unique cliff face and low vegetation typical to Bodega Bay, California, which is where a pivotal scene takes place. And that’s what brings me here. It’s a cover art quest. I need to get some photos of these beaches for Viona to work with.

Cover Reveal

The cover for Book II is about to be revealed. Keep your eyes peeled because just after the cover reveal, Revelation will be released. I can’t wait.

As an aside, this is our first road trip without Molly’s half-sister, Soozie. They travelled extensively with us since 2000. It seems strange to be making this journey without her – as if a book end is missing.

*Update: in 2018, the heavy hand I had in book cover design proved fatal. Read more about the rebrand here.

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