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So You Think You Can Write?

August 8, 2013 By JPMcLean 4 Comments

Fish Out of Water 

Some time ago I wrote a list post about lessons I learned in the process of writing my first book. The value of editors was one of the lessons. Editors see things writers don’t. (I can’t say for sure, but I suspect they have a third eye.) They see where the story drags, where the action is confusing, where the characters aren’t being true to themselves, where the setting falls short, or where description is excessive, and so much more.

Pink starfish caught on a fishing hookThe first time I went through this process, it was a shock to my system.

I thought I was prepared: I wasn’t. Instead, I was left wondering, “What the hell was I thinking? I can’t write.” I was a fish out of water. I had to set the manuscript aside and regroup.

After a few days, I picked up the editor’s notes again. This time, I was able to receive the feedback in the spirit it was given. I rewrote the entire manuscript—even started from a point further along in the story.

During that often frustrating and time-consuming process, the narrative improved immeasurably. Characters filled out, choreography improved, description got honed.

Next up? A Copy Editor

After I’d finished, a copy editor went through it examining every verb for proper fit and smoothing out rough spots I didn’t even know were there. The end product was worth every agonizing minute of rewrite. And because my name is on the cover, I’m very happy I invested the extra time and money for professional editors.

If you are considering publishing your work, I highly recommend you find professional editors to work with. You won’t regret it. I started with a Manuscript Evaluation through the Writers’ Union of Canada http://www.writersunion.ca/content/manuscript-evaluations. Another useful resource is the Editors’ Association of Canada https://editors.ca/hire/. Their website will guide your search.

How about you? Have you had a memorable editing experience?

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